Can someone reword this for me?

You might consider listing with bullet points. You could start with description, strengths, and flaws, and sub-categorize under those. Taking care to use capitalization and punctuation carefully, the list would look interesting and invite further reading. It might be a good idea to start with headings on paper, and list each sub under its proper title. Then as you polish, you can pay attention to syntax (all verbs in same tense, etc). I would be interested to know how it turns out for you.